
hello guys today I will show you my writing work i did today.the word of the day is excellence.I made a story about the picture.
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Athea this is a great piece of writing I like the way you have given it a title and organised your writing into paragraphs. You know a lot about the paralympics, have you watched many of the events?
ReplyDeleteHi Athea.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your blog.
I liked how you told us that it wasn't easy for you to do every day things we take for granted. I hope you get to watch some of the para olympics.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs B